Strongbow Saga Book 4: The Long Hunt

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A Good Plan

 
Soon it would be done. Soon Toke would be dead, and Harald avenged. For we had a plan.

“I have been giving this matter much thought,” Hastein had told me, after we’d reached Danish waters on our voyage home from Frankia. “You wish to bring a case under the law against Toke at a Thing, charging him with murder. And I would of course support you in such a case, as would Hrodgar. Having the jarl ruling over the Limfjord district and the chieftain of the village closest to where the killings occurred join you in the case would almost certainly guarantee success. But the greatest sentence a Thing can pass is outlawry. Toke would forfeit any lands he now holds here─lands which rightfully belong to you, anyway─and would be banished from the kingdom of the Danes.  But there is a way Toke could contest a Thing-court’s decision. He would have the right to challenge his accuser to a duel….”

I knew what Hastein had left unsaid. I was greatly changed from the boy who had sworn an oath of vengeance against Toke. I had gained much experience as a warrior in Frankia, and I had killed men─many men, counting all those my arrows had felled in battle. I had even killed Snorre, Toke’s second-in-command, in a formal duel. But Toke was different. I did not want to face Toke one on one. He was as strong and nearly as large as a bear, and very quick and light on his feet. And I was afraid of him. I had always been afraid of him, for as far back as I could remember. I did not believe I could best him in such a fight.

“No, we must surprise and trap him with overwhelming force. Then, as jarl over the Limfjord district, I will call upon him to surrender. I will tell him I will take him to King Horik, to answer the charge that he wrongfully killed Harald and his men, and I will give him my oath that he will come to no harm on the journey there. Ivar and Bjorn will join with me, also─it will be no small thing, to a man like Toke, that two sons of Ragnar Logbrod are urging him to come peacefully and appear before the king.

“Toke is of noble birth. He is the grandson of a jarl. He will not believe the king will do more than outlaw him, if that.” Hastein smiled a grim smile. “Had he only killed Harald and his men, he would probably be right. These things happen. His mistake was killing everyone─the women, the children, even the thralls. And he killed them after giving his oath that they would be safe. It was the worst kind of niddingsvaark. King Horik is a man who greatly values honor. He has no use for a Nithing. He will hang Toke. I feel sure of it. It is a good plan.”

My own plan differed slightly from Hastein’s. I knew Toke. He would never surrender. He would fight us, even if he knew he could not win. He would rather die with a sword in his hand, killing as many of his enemies as he could, than allow himself to be taken without a fight. He would fight us, and when he did, I would put an arrow through his eye.

Soon it would be done.

We had landed at dusk a short distance up the coast from the estate that had once belonged to Hrorik, my father, and after him to my brother, Harald. Ivar and Bjorn had indeed come with us. They wanted to see the end of the tale Hastein had told the entire army at the feast that last night in Paris, before our fleet had left Frankia and sailed for home with the ransom we’d won. Hrodgar and the men from the village on the Limfjord had come, too, although some of them had grumbled at the prospect of further delay in returning to their homes, once they were so close.

“It is our duty,” Hrodgar had chided them. “It was we who discovered the slaughter at Hrorik’s farm. It was to us that Toke spun his web of lies, to cover his own misdeeds. We allowed him to escape, and even sent two of our own to help hunt Halfdan, believing Toke’s tale that he was a bandit. Toke must know, when he is brought to justice, that we are no longer his fools.”

We planned to surround the longhouse in the last hours before dawn while the household still slept, trapping Toke and his men inside.  Hastein and Ivar and most of their warriors were with me now, hiding in the edge of the woodlands that bordered the cleared lands of the estate. I’d led them there in the dark, through the forest that I’d hunted in so often as a boy. At first light, Bjorn, Hrodgar, and the rest of the men would bring the ships around to block any chance of escape by sea.

“It is time,” Hastein whispered, reaching out and touching my arm from where he was sitting nearby, his back against the trunk of a tree. When we’d arrived, he’d been but an indistinct shadow. Now I could make out his outline, and see the looming shape of Torvald sitting beyond him. “The sky will begin to lighten soon,” he continued. “We should be in place before anyone ventures outside.”

I seated my helm on my head, twisting it back and forth with my hands until it felt comfortable, then tied the strap under my chin. I stood, braced my bow against my right foot, and strung it. Beside me, Tore did the same.

“Do you think he might fight?” he asked me.  “This Toke? Against great chieftains like Jarl Hastein, and Ivar, and Bjorn? It would be madness. But Torvald says he is a berserker, and with them, you never know.”

I shrugged my shoulders in answer, and slipped the strap of my quiver over my head, so that it hung at my right hip with the arrows ready to draw. I searched through them and selected one I knew shot true. It had a heavy oak shaft, and was tipped with a short iron head with a square cross-section that tapered to a sharp point. I called such heads mail-breakers. I’d found a barrel full of them in a storeroom in the island fort that had been the home of Count Robert of Paris before we’d taken it and the town. I’d stowed a sack of the heads in my sea chest, and had mounted two dozen on my heaviest arrows during the long voyage back from Frankia.

I touched my finger to the tip, feeling its sharpness. Recalling where I’d found it brought thoughts of Paris flooding into my mind. Where was Genevieve now? What was she doing? I remembered the last words she had spoken to me. She’d brushed my cheek with her hand, and whispered, “I will pray every day to my God to watch over you and protect you. I will pray to Him to shelter my love from wind and wave on your long journey back to your land.” Then she had turned and walked away without looking back.

I shook my head, trying to clear it of thoughts of her. I could not afford to be distracted by memories of the happiness we’d shared so briefly then lost. I had a man to kill. Perhaps many. All of my thoughts must be on that for now.

I led our force of warriors from the forest’s edge that lay just behind the crest of the low hill atop which the bodies of my mother and Hrorik had been burned and sent upon their death voyage—the  hill overlooking the longhouse, from where we would launch our attack.  It was here that Harald had found me, the morning after their funeral pyre. The burial mound within the standing stones that formed the outline of the death ship had grown a lush cover of tall grass since I had last been here.

In the great feast hall of the gods, did my mother know what I had become? Did she think it was worth the sacrifice she had made? And what did Hrorik think now of his slave son? When he’d reached Valhalla, Harald would have told them of how he’d trained me, and of my first battle─the one that had cost Harald his life. But much had happened since then. Did my family know, where they dwelled now in the distant land of the gods?

Morning fog shrouded the hilltop. We spread out into a long line, Hastein at its center. Torvald, Tore and I, with the rest of the warriors from the Gull save the skeleton crew who would sail it round from where we’d landed yester night, aligned ourselves to his right. Ivar and his men formed to Hastein’s left. Hastein’s two captains, Stig and Svein, with their warriors, anchored the two ends of the line, barely visible now in the morning fog.

Hastein drew his sword, waved it overhead, then pointed it toward the longhouse. We moved forward slowly across the hilltop and down its slopes, like an army of ghosts gliding silently through the mist.  When we reached the base of the hill, Stig and Svein and their men trotted ahead, curving the ends of the line forward to encircle the longhouse within a wall of armed men that touched the shore at either end.  The trap was closed, and those inside were now surrounded. No one would be able to escape.

Ivar raised his horn to his lips and blew a long, challenging call. After a moment, he blew it again. From out over the water, we heard another horn give answer. The ships, which had rounded the point and were waiting for the signal, would pull for the shore below us now that they knew we were in position.

The door to the longhouse opened, and a head peered out. Seeing us, it jerked quickly back inside and the door slammed shut.

I thought it lax of Toke that no sentries stood guard outside during the night. Even though the estate lay in the heart of the lands of the Danes, he was a man with enemies.

Hastein called out in a strong, clear voice, “You, inside the longhouse. Hear this! My name is Hastein. I am jarl over the Limfjord district. I have business with Toke. I come in peace, so long as violence is not offered to me and my men. On that, I give my word. But those inside must come out now, and bearing no weapons. You are surrounded. If you do not come out and meet with us in peace, blood will be shed.”

For a long time, there was only silence. I spent the time recalling in my mind images of the longhouse. If we had to breach its walls with a ram, where would be the best place to attack? Hastein was not Toke, nor was I.  We would not burn it with innocents inside.

Finally the door opened, and a voice from within shouted, “We are coming out. We bear no arms.”

Gunhild lead the procession that filed out of the longhouse door. That I had not expected. As much as I hated her, I could not deny that she showed courage in doing so. Behind her, one by one, peering fearfully at us as they left the safety of the longhouse, came the estate’s carls, their wives and children, and the thralls who lived and worked on the estate where most of my life had been spent.

Toke and his warriors were not among them.

“Does anyone remain inside the longhouse?” Hastein shouted. “If you are not truthful, it will go hard on you.”

Gunhild shook her head. “There is no one left inside.”

Hastein murmured to Torvald, “See if she speaks the truth. Take Halfdan and Tore. Be careful.”

The three of us strode toward the open door of the longhouse. Tore and I had our shields slung across our backs and our bows raised and at ready. Torvald held his shield angled in front of him, covering his chest and neck, and he carried a spear cocked back, ready to throw. The moment when he entered the doorway would be the most dangerous.  Tore and I would cover him as best we could.

Something nagged at the back of my mind.  I stared at the faces of the frightened folk huddled behind Gunhild and realized that Toke and his men were not the only ones missing.

“Wait,” I said to Torvald and Tore in a low voice, then turned toward Gunhild and snapped at her in a louder one, “Where is Sigrid? Where is Ubbe?”

She’d looked pale before, but at my questions, the blood remaining in her face drained from it.

“Who are you to know those names?”

It was not surprising she did not recognize me. The light was still dim─it would be a while yet before the sun rose─and my helm and its nasal bar obscured my features. And I was not the boy she had last seen.  I was a warrior now. The boy who’d left here was now a man, wearing a shirt of Frankish mail, and a Frankish helm, with a fine sword hanging at his hip. The beginnings of a beard lined my jaw. And around my right arm was the torque of solid gold that Ragnar Logbrod himself had given me. I wore it now because I wished to make a strong impression when I first reappeared at my former home. I was no longer Halfdan, the former slave. I was the warrior Strongbow.

“I am called Strongbow,” I replied. “Answer me. Where are Sigrid and Ubbe?”

Someone said, “I know that voice,” and a man in a shabby, soiled tunic pushed his way to the front of the crowd.

“Get behind me, thrall,” Gunhild told him, but he ignored her.

“Is it you?” he asked in a quavering voice. “Is it Halfdan?”

I had not counted on this. I loosened the strap under my chin and pulled my helm from my head. “Fasti,” I answered. “It is. I have returned.”

Gunhild staggered back. She would have fallen had those behind her not supported her. “But you are dead!” she gasped.

“It would seem I am not.” To Fasti, I said, “Quickly. You must tell me. Where is Toke? Are he and his men still inside? Where are Sigrid and Ubbe?”

The expression of wonder that had filled his face a moment before was replaced by a look of pain and fear.

“Toke is gone. He and all of his men. He killed Ubbe, and took Sigrid with him.”

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204 thoughts on “Strongbow Saga Book 4: The Long Hunt

  1. I’m an adult who loves all kinds of books. I often read children books or young adult books after reading books with lots of murder and mayhem, but when I discovered your Strongbow Saga books I fell so in love with it that I have to send it back home to my 15 nieces and nephew since they don’t have any access to good books back home and if there is they couldn’t afford it. Still it’s so hard to be waiting for the 4th book, I have tried other series but none could compare to this one. I hope I won’t have to wait too long before it comes out and I’m sure my nieces and nephews were eagerly waiting for it too. Please hurry, thank you

      • Back in the Philippines, I’m a Canadian citizen of Filipino descent but for us reading is a tremendous pleasure and I must have read thousands of books yet I know the Strongbow Saga stood out above the rest of them. Keep up the good work and I hope there will be more books like this coming out of your imagination.

  2. Silly me, I’ve been watching your Facebook page for updates on book four for a long time, I was a bit bored today so I googled the fourth installment and I found this page… This was here the whole time! =D I thoroughly enjoyed the preview, your writing technique caught my attention and held it until I was finished reading the preview, as I read my heart beat quickened and I could hear it, such suspense! I am just wondering how far along are you with the novel at the moment?

    • Glad you found it. I confess I’m not a very big fan of Facebook, so rarely post there.

      Book 4 is progressing steadily now, though never as quickly as I’d like. At the moment I’m immersed in researching sea voyages, particularly across the Baltic, and am using the bits of data I find to flesh out scenes with accurate detail.

      • I see. Well, I’ll just have to add this website to the list of websites I check daily.

        I am glad that you’re making steady progress, don’t feel pressured to rush the novel for us, you have to enjoy writing it! I never realized the amount of effort an author puts in when writing a book, it must be exhausting at times. But if done well, (Which you have so far) the end result is well worth the wait.

        I hope you will keep us all updated on your progress throughout the weeks until your work is published.

        Kind Regards

        Remco Thoen

        • No need to check here daily. On the home page, you can subscribe by entering your email address, and you’ll receive a notice whenever I post an update.

        • As we approach 2014 I long to know how the tale continues. Will it have a happy ending is the Nun with child, Is the sister with child? Will he succeed in his endeavors to kill his brother. When can put your poor fans out of their misery. from a fan in the Hunter Valley Australia.

  3. Very glad I found your work! Finished the first three books in about 2 weeks in between work, writing exams and enjoying an 18 month old toddler. Please don’t make us wait too long for more!

    Great storytelling!

    G

  4. That was really good just one question though is halfdan going to get together with genevieve

        • In my opinion, the Count Robert should demand his daughters release and allow her to marry anyone she would like. So she sails with wulf or if that doesn’t happen stows away on wilds ship and stats until they reach Hedeby or another major port and she starts a quest for Halfdan. If you do not incorporate this into the 4th it would be a good book for after the series or something like th Beast of Dublin!

  5. That was so great i cant wait for more i want the next book to come out soon that was so good. i have a question though will halfdan get tograther with

  6. YOUR PLANING ON 5!!!!!!!!?????????

    YAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!

    Hi, i was never realy an avid reader till 3 years ago i was given a book by my grandmother for chistmas. The poor little book was second hand and in poor condition, i read it, loved it, got the rest of them (including a new copy of the first) and never looked back. My book colection now numbers in the hundereds!

    I thank you with all my heart for you books and wait eagerly for more.
    p.s dont rush them, take all the time you need, you cant rush art

  7. I am ravenous and eager for more! There is so much suspense and intensity going on when I finish the fourth, I’m going to go insane from waiting!

  8. Hi Judson,

    I think you’ll remember me from previous comments. From around February last year till now, your books are the only ones I’ve read and the next one will probably be one of my “onlys” this year. Hahaha. Shows how much I love your books, a none-reader turned reader… Well sort of. Hahaha 🙂

      • I’m just so grateful because I really love the Viking stories and tales and the Nordic Countries. Thank you for writing such good books!

  9. hi, i am an advid fan of your strongbow series. i was wondering if you had any idea as to how soon the 4th book will be coming out. I have been waiting 4+ years for it and will continue to wait because the moment i read viking warrior, i knew i was hooked. Thanks for the wonderful books

      • Mr. Roberts, I recently found your Strongbow series and read them in record time. ( A couple of days). Now I’m waiting, rather impatiently, for #4. I read James Patterson’s Saxon series and found you while looking for his most recent. I know living in Oregon can be distracting and all, but please get back to work writing #4 +.
        Thank you, Rick

  10. When I bought the first three books published by Harper teen I was awaiting the fourth book with anticipation. and after reading how you had to change publishers I thought that was the end of StongBow. Now I await for book four even more,

    Keep up the beutiful writing!

    • Thank you, Adrian.

      Books and screenplays are sometimes described by those who teach writing as typically following a three act structure. While I think that characterization doesn’t necessarily apply to all novels–or at least, it is a stretch to try to break some stories down that way–book four, The Long Hunt, actually does have that structure. I hope to wrap up act one today, and begin act two tomorrow.

      • Have you thought of making a movie series about this?! This is by far the best book series I have ever read! Just reading that preview I was an edge and the beast of Dublin! Nothing more than purely amazing! You have an uncanny talent for writing, instead of with a bow.

        • I would love to see the series as one or more movies, as long as they were made true to the books. But that’s not something a solitary author can bring about. Members of the film-making community have to decide they want to invest the immense time, effort, and money to translate a book nto film.

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